Friday 3 March 2017

Rough Cut - Thriller Coursework

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  1. Seth and Rasheyd
    00.15: The sound change from shot 1 to 2 is too significant. You need to add a sound bed under shot 1 so it doesn’t jar.
    00.26 great transition.
    Good font choice, and well paced font placement
    00.47 great shot
    01.32 You cut at the right moment
    01.21 is not very well framed. Do you have any other Cus/ lower angles for this section?
    Your soundtrack is effective, but loses tension. Is it worth building in another soundtrack as it goes on in order to heighten the tension?
    Make sure you add the name for that music credit

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